I absolutely enjoyed your personal essay, your refection on searching for ' divinity' as a writer and exploring it in the works of
Your emotional struggles, challenges in your self woth as a writer were apparent, and I felt and related with them . I was amused by the preety heavy writing for a young man, I was amused and pleased, thesentences were engaging, forcing the reader to also reflect on their own search for divinity.
But it got dry in the middle, when you went, a little too long in the comparison and lost me for a few minutes.
Clean, engaging sentece structure, I loved the last paragraph, and almost sat with and went through your emotional journey, in discovering your authentic truth and making peace with it. I sighed with relief, for I had also felt your pain , in your frustration in not finding this 'Dvinity'. I laugh now, happy that you made peace.
I absolutely enjoyed your personal essay, your refection on searching for ' divinity' as a writer and exploring it in the works of
Your emotional struggles, challenges in your self woth as a writer were apparent, and I felt and related with them . I was amused by the preety heavy writing for a young man, I was amused and pleased, thesentences were engaging, forcing the reader to also reflect on their own search for divinity.
But it got dry in the middle, when you went, a little too long in the comparison and lost me for a few minutes.
Clean, engaging sentece structure, I loved the last paragraph, and almost sat with and went through your emotional journey, in discovering your authentic truth and making peace with it. I sighed with relief, for I had also felt your pain , in your frustration in not finding this 'Dvinity'. I laugh now, happy that you made peace.